| 8月23日作业专题六第二讲 徐萍 |
| 徐 萍 (6581140024) 发表于 2007-08-22 13:50:58 |
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| 开放作文学习与备考计划活动 |
开放作文学习与备考计划 学生情况:普通中学高三学生,基础一般,优秀少数 教师情况:高考任务较重,三个班教学 周次 学生活动 1 -2 让学生写一些自己的生活经历和感受,表达对父母的感激之情,四人一组评出较好的 一篇. 3-4 集体评出最好的10篇作文,结合优秀的文章修改自己的文章 5-6 介绍高考新题型,按要求修改自己的作文 7-8 新的高考题型训练,引导学生形成开放作文备考模式 附: 高考新题型 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, I'm amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. That's why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means "lion". It's our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what you'd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mother's labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (脐带) and put you in your mother's arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lion's heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[写作内容]
假设你就是信中的Ari，父亲在你出生的时候写了这封信。今天是父亲50岁生日，你准备以写信的方式，祝贺他的生日。以下是信的内容(信的开头和结尾已经为你写好)：
1．以约30个词概括父亲在他信中对你的期望；
2．以约120个词表达你对父亲的感恩，并包括如下要点：
(1)读信后的感受；
(2)以你自己成长的经历说明你的感受；
(3)表达你对父亲的感激和祝福。
[写作要求]
1．作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子；
2．信中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
[评分标准]
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。
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